2022.10.08 组会（写作）

答辩

1. Research Problem: 做了什么
   1. Background
   2. Motivation
   3. Content
2. Innovation: 创新在哪
   1. Approach: 前人的工作是什么，对比自己的创新在哪（不要说自己是首创）
   2. Experiment Setup: 在什么设定下来评价结果，即 metrics 和 Scenario Comparison
   3. Results
   4. *Implementation: 如果实验很创新，可以提一下用了什么来实现
3. Conclusion
4. Future Work

写作

1. 语句通顺，让人能看懂，没有语法错误（单复数、时态）
2. 语句之间要有逻辑，逻辑要简单，例如：
   1. There are three reasons ... / The reasons bebind this fact are as follows. First, ... , Second ... , Third, ...
   2. Two birds eat two apples. These birds are in red skins. The red skins ... These apples are in red color. The red color ...
   3. 不要使用：Condition 1, Condition 2 -> Conclusion
   4. 不要使用定语从句（which，that），会打乱语句间的逻辑
3. 如何写大纲（Outline，Roadmap）：大纲中的每一段都要有一句话来概括内容，要精确到段，以主题为 Fault Localization 的论文为例
   1. 1 Introduction
      1. P1: Software faults are inevitable.
      2. P2: Localizing faults has been widely studied.
      3. P3: Existing techniques of fault localization have focused on two categories. First, ... Second, ...
      4. P4: However, ...
      5. P5: In this paper, we proposed a new approach ...
      6. P6: Experiment, result, approach
      7. P7: Structure of the rest ...
   2. 2 Background and Motivations
      1. 2.1 Background
         1. Faults and risks
         2. approachs
      2. 2.2 Motivations (HOWEVER)
         1. General, ...
         2. Example, ... (real world, open source)
         3. Our approach addressed the "HOWEVER"
   3. 3 Approach
      1. 3.1 Overview / Framework 要有图，涵盖方法的整体框架
         1. 图：形式为 input -> box -> output，每一个方框都要有输入和输出
      2. 3.2 A
      3. 3.3 B 要具体到自己的方法
         1. Genetic algorithm 应该放到 Background 中
         2. Genetic algorithm based localization
   4. 4 Experiment Setup
      1. Data / Project
      2. Setup 让读者能复现
      3. Metric
      4. Methods in Comparison
      5. Research Question (RQ)
         1. Example RQ: How accurate does our approach ...
         2. 有 3-4 个 RQ，RQ 之间要有逻辑
         3. 答案要明确：yes, no, how much
   5. 5 Threats to Validity
      1. 偏负面，但要柔和一些
      2. e.g., The implementation of our approach can handle Java faults in real-world problems. It may not be generalized to other programming languages. This approach can be generalized to languages with similar structure of object-oriented methods.（提出缺点，然后找补一点回来）
      3. Discussion 中可以有正面的
   6. Tables and Figures
      1. 所有的图/表都要有图头/表头
      2. 要说明 x 轴和 y 轴是什么
      3. 图表示例如下

Table 1. Precision and recall of four methods in comparison

	ID	Description	Precision	Recall
Project 1
...

• Table 1 shows precision and recall ... 表的总体讲了什么
• Table 1 description ... 对表的描述，每一列是什么
• Table 1 observation ... 从表中可以观察到什么现象
• Table 1 analysis ... 对于这种现象的分析
• Table 1 conclusion ... 由分析得出的结论